The one thing that I think you should improve on your blog is more voice. I like your blog alot but I thought there wasn't very much voice inside of it.
It was hard to find something to find but i dont think you put enuph of you talking in your posts
Also you only posted up 4 guiding questions not 5.
I think your blog needs more voice. It doesn't sound like you are talking, it sounds like you are just going through your topics.
leahd1, I did post five guiding questions, you have to click on the older posts button
The one thing that I think you should improve on your blog is more voice. I like your blog alot but I thought there wasn't very much voice inside of it.
ReplyDeleteIt was hard to find something to find but i dont think you put enuph of you talking in your posts
ReplyDeleteAlso you only posted up 4 guiding questions not 5.
ReplyDeleteI think your blog needs more voice. It doesn't sound like you are talking, it sounds like you are just going through your topics.
ReplyDeleteleahd1, I did post five guiding questions, you have to click on the older posts button
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